I look around to empty spaces,
vacant places; my memories
still cling to voices gone with
faces indistinct. Just a teen in
olive green, an SLR, a bandolier
and two grenades. My jungle
hat saw better days. I recall the
crushing heat, the aching feet
and battle sound we learned
to fear or disregard – the only
sounds that mattered were the
pungent cracks of rifle rounds
impacting in our space – the
cry “incoming” and a race to
cover or a safer place. I wasn’t
brave, I peed my pants, stank
just like the rest indeed – but
now they’re gone. The fear
remains and in the night the
voices claim my ears.
I sleep because I take the pills
that ease the pain – replacing
mates whose names I might
recall before I fall asleep.
© 20 December 2007, I. D. Carswell
vacant places; my memories
still cling to voices gone with
faces indistinct. Just a teen in
olive green, an SLR, a bandolier
and two grenades. My jungle
hat saw better days. I recall the
crushing heat, the aching feet
and battle sound we learned
to fear or disregard – the only
sounds that mattered were the
pungent cracks of rifle rounds
impacting in our space – the
cry “incoming” and a race to
cover or a safer place. I wasn’t
brave, I peed my pants, stank
just like the rest indeed – but
now they’re gone. The fear
remains and in the night the
voices claim my ears.
I sleep because I take the pills
that ease the pain – replacing
mates whose names I might
recall before I fall asleep.
© 20 December 2007, I. D. Carswell
was this one written from your experience? it is very powerful indeed.
ReplyDeletejust stopping by to wish you a merry christmas and to tell you i really enjoy your writing.
Thank you Merelyme. In one sense it is the personal experience of every combat soldier - and that is the sense intended. Fortunately I am not affected by post traumatic stress however it is an insidious and debilitating condition affecting many former soldiers. The poem is for all of those unknown but never forgotten Servicemen & women.
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