Formerly: A Past You Can’t Reclaim
you’ve had
the lines aching
like wisps of want
waiting in the corners
of your conscious mind
for days
lissom lines that sway
with rhythms poignantly
melodic lines a-play
in echoes of
a half-remembered
never quite forgot
coda to a past
you’ve not
replayed enough
to succour
satisfaction
time to
write them down
has come and
gone again
they linger on
languishing
fragments of
a fascinating realm
that’s lost
a perfect past
you can’t regain
© 28 June 2007, I.D. Carswell
you’ve had
the lines aching
like wisps of want
waiting in the corners
of your conscious mind
for days
lissom lines that sway
with rhythms poignantly
melodic lines a-play
in echoes of
a half-remembered
never quite forgot
coda to a past
you’ve not
replayed enough
to succour
satisfaction
time to
write them down
has come and
gone again
they linger on
languishing
fragments of
a fascinating realm
that’s lost
a perfect past
you can’t regain
© 28 June 2007, I.D. Carswell
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