19 December 2008

Echoes

distance
you hear them
clear, the ringing in
of echoes neat
of yesteryears that
sing with joy

my ears embrace
those reveries:
though ill at ease
this heart beats still
with gratitude

I quake in
vacant loneliness
of platitudes
while echoes fill
an aching heart
© 6 December 2008, I. D. Carswell

2 comments:

  1. Oh Ivan,
    What a lovely poem! Sent chills through my soul.
    How wonderful you displayed memories, regrets if any, hearts together and alone. I loved it!
    I will return to read this one again and again.
    Oh, and Ivan, I liked the style of this poem.
    See, BIG things do come in small packages.

    Bessye (Visions)

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  2. I once campaigned against the shorter verse; I am now a committed supporter - if only because it makes SMS texting easier! I actually sent this one to my wife who is away having some private R&R time to herself

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