he fakes a braver face        
although the tears are real         
he never learned to make         
his eyes express emotions         
much beyond the stirrings         
in his heart 
you are bereaved, he said        
sudden loss of someone’s         
love is death – it seems         
there is no mortal way         
to fill the void of utter         
aching loneliness 
there is no meaning left        
for what the future brings         
the past is all that keeps         
your sanity intact, where         
memories sustain         
a sense of real 
your love has gone        
and left you dead, you         
grieve for magic that you         
had in arms of love received         
a pain one cannot bear         
without reprieve         
© 21 December 2008, I. D. Carswell
Okay Ivan,
ReplyDeleteI'm just going to have to sign out, because one right after the other is better and better. Your putting my poetry to shame...what is a women to do.
bessye