this is the house that you built
not the way you’d do it again
arguably – but nonetheless
a mute testament
you made the colours calm
and the walls permanent
at least I stayed free knowing
it was your choice
if it was yours; the lonely
days distance themselves
in fragrant innuendo, scents
that cloud reason
they grew here where you
used to be – do they plague
you too in your raison
de renaissance?
© 16 Dec 2009, I. D. Carswell
very austere picture you've painted here...i see lots of paintings in my mind.
ReplyDeleteI must admit I had a similar experience - especially when choosing illustrations for the item!
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