16 January 2009

A Haven In A Craven World (rev)

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Give to me your children he beseeched, I
cannot save your souls of the disease that
anchors you to paths astray – I’ve tried to
teach the error of your ways and failed.
Your children I can save as innocents in
reach of true salvation; let me take them
to a safer place. And where would be a
sanctuary with guarantees the sceptics

asked, a haven in a craven World – whom
do you admit you answer to with licence
to prevaricate? Not the same pontificate?
Why yes indeed, there is but one, he says.
You’ll see reflections of his face in all the
children’s smiles come Christmas day.
© 23 December 2007, I. D. Carswell

2 comments:

  1. "Your children I can save as innocents in
    reach of true salvation; let me take them
    to a safer place."

    I guess this poem was written about two years ago, but I'm thinking Gaza.

    Nicely done like your other poems.

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  2. Thanks Matt, the earlier Gaza situation, and others similar throughout Africa and Asia were in the back of my mind - plus of course Western history!

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