15 January 2009

Dawn

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crows call starkly in
the gathering light as
dawn blushes before
today’s mirror – a
pure white goose
on the dam floats
quiet – will she fly
or will she stay ...
© 11 September 2008, I. D. Carswell

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:44 am

    Wow. Nothing but image and description and yet it conveys so much. Thank you.

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  2. Anonymous2:53 am

    Hi Ivan, your number one fan here...
    Beautiful! and short (lol). Do you take your own pictures?

    bessye

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