write something simple
he says, something that
sings in melody, is phrased
in simple words
don’t make me wade
through tepid swamps
of tumid wit seeking
safer clichés
wilt a little bit
drop off the pretentious
cliff before its face
gives way
implores, again,
there’s room for wisdom in
single syllables, so – write less
and mean more
© 28 March 2009, I. D. Carswell
excellent
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