the first words I read are those
you pen, brief and to the point –
and then the music wells within
it is a symphony unleashed, an
invocation where your scent is
seed that manufactures dreams
in wafted gentle breath afloat
upon unspoken promises I see
and understand your brevity
simplicity and grace conspire to
make aesthete the man whose
greed would triumph over me
© 9 July 2010, I. D. Carswell
I'm glad to find your poetry. I'll keep reading, promise!
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