if rain didn’t do it
and you agreed it had
the facility then disparate
views of tedium confused
me; it is as if to say atmosphere
constrained within a tent
defines what is and what
is not deemed wet
– though assuredly these
are loose ascriptions, 95%
humidity is none-the-less
wall-to-wall damp and
snail trails spread
perfidiously
© 27 December 2010, I. D. Carswell
Very enjoyable. You have a good many followers,
ReplyDeletebut not so many comments. That seems terribly out of balance. Is is apathy, or are we just getting lazy? Thank you for your good work.