Oh, it isn’t a new scene - merely a rewrite of the
old; its been termed phantasmagory by some in
the bolder set - to an extent they might even be
right where the money is; of the rest tho’ its just
a way you hold your mouth when earth tremors
upset the applecart as we do a shopping spree;
not a biggie in either dialogue, but there’s room
to disagree whether objectives are reached
And it is usually an insight into whose analysis
fits the personality which stands to be greatest
distressed - some would say its me because a
little bird whispered in their ears - he’s way out
character, you can see he’s struggling to keep
his poise which he likes to be sang froid free
© 24 June 2016, I. D. Carswell
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